This one's very nice, too, only aren't the colours as saturated as in the first of the two. Did you forget "doing something" to it?
Is "she" actually looking in your direction (our direction, as it is)?
And, hey, it's not HIM to decide whether she'll get her. She does. If he's not beautiful enough, she'll just walk past, whether he's there, strutting, or not.
(In this case, however, I'd just say: He made it! He IS very impressive, indeed!)