If the boy is the subject of the image, he should not be on the edge and in the shadows. You need something to draw the eye to his face. As it stands, the man's butt seems to be the main focal point.
My real problem here is that you've told me in your introduction what I should be looking at. Your images should speak for themselves without needing explanation.
Conversely, if you do not think the image is doing what it should be doing, then you might want to write, "I wanted to capture xyz."
Also, I find your large and distracting. I would make it smaller, move it to the lower right (at least for this image) and remove the tagline.