These look soft again... :(

[Aayria]

These are a huge improvement, you should be really proud of the progress! =)

I really liked viewing this set, and I love that you shot during the golden hour <3

 

[ajkramer87]

I like these. While scrolling down one thing did catch my eye. In number 2 you can see she doesnt have matching socks on. Not really a huge deal but it caught my eye none the less.

 

[vtf]

I like these. While scrolling down one thing did catch my eye. In number 2 you can see she doesnt have matching socks on. Not really a huge deal but it caught my eye none the less.

My daughter is 22 and still doesnt wear matching socks
If you shot these in RAW then you need to adjust the sharpness, many forget the sharpness is done incamera for jpeg but not for RAW.
I really dont see alot of issue except maybe #4 as noted above.
Better focus than my ren faire ones a week or so ago, still havent got out to retry yet with my 50mm.:thumbup:

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Oh.. That child and hee socks. I pick my battles... she says its "in" I don't argue lol. I did sharpen some... maybe more?

 

[vtf]

Oh.. That child and hee socks. I pick my battles... she says its "in" I don't argue lol. I did sharpen some... maybe more?

If it bothers you maybe, I think they look good. I use unsharp mask more than sharpening tools then sometimes I selectively do it. All you can do is test it and see. Hope you dont mind, the first is your original, the second is my edit. It might be over done. Doing this also seems to separate the subject from the background more.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

I think it looks good. What settings did you do for the unsharp mask? Thanks!

 

[vtf]

I think it looks good. What settings did you do for the unsharp mask? Thanks!

I always forget to add that.
Amount 33%
Radious 1.2
Threshold 0
I used the selection tool and selected her head, hair and fingers on top of the bar then used the unsharp mask. I repeated the step on her lower torso and arms using the same settings. Left the rest alone. This was done in PSE.