This is not your mom and dad's senior pictures.

[eric-holmes]

Trying something new for me. Some will like it, some will hate it. Fill flash was camera left, bare sb-600.

 

[NikonME]

I am the latter.

 

[Kerbouchard]

I'm afraid I would belong to that second group. Washed out, low contrast, plus harsh shadows, shoulders and head pretty much straight on to the camera, but hey, at least you followed the rule of thirds and the lines from the bench seem fairly straight.

I think my biggest nit, even above the color tint, overexposure, and pose would be the shadows from the subjects left arm and her right foot don't match.

 

[KBM1016]

I like the idea but I think her face is to bright. I drives my focus away from her face.

 

[Arch]

I like it, i'd give it a touch more contrast though.

 

[ghache]

I like the washed out look and low contrast,

i think it works and its probably the look you where going for.

 

[bogeyguy]

Whatever floats "your" boat.

 

[joealcantar]

Not working for me.
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Shoot well, Joe

 

[ngaerlan]

If you think it looks good then it looks good, there will always be room for improvment.

Eternal Eights Photography

 

[TheoGraphics]

Looks nice! Next time, try using a reflector to bounce some of that nice sunlight back onto the model's face so that she doesn't look so washed out.

 

[subscuck]

I like this particular style, just not this particular shot. It's a little too overdone. Too much loss of detail in her face.

 

[molested_cow]

A little burning at the face and hair will probably go a long way.

 

[TerryKylePhotography]

I like it.

 

[eric-holmes]

Here is another picture I had taken. I actually like it better. Same time of day, just a slightly less dramatic angle.

I also want to add that this is a screen from my iPhone taken from Facebook. It may not be too high quality.