Thoughts? Fashion Without Fabric model

[JDP]

Ok, barring technical problems (This picture is virtually unedited except for a resizing, etc) what are your thoughts on it's composition? It was taken at a Fashion without Fabric, and I know it can't be really used as a model shot, but I really like this one, as a portrait style shot

 

[Hertz van Rental]

I really like this one

In which case there is nothing wrong with the shot