I actually find something very interesting in this.
It is a nice mixture of motion and still capture. I think you should play a little bit more with the idea and see what else you can come up with. Overall, I think it is a little too busy, but it is interesting just the same.
Were you going for having a mixture of stills and blur (I'm assuming), rather than having the same person show up in different places? It is hard to tell, but that is the way it appears.
I'd be interested to see more like this.