"To Make Your World." A composite photo, C&C please.

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I just finished this, and I know I still have a long way to go on my composite work, but I am gaining on it. :)
Any C&C is welcome.

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Good to great start.
three suggestions.
Have the torso more defined and separated from background.
Show a bit of the face
Have the 'thing' erupt from a seam rather just out of blank 'wall'
 
Good to great start.
three suggestions.
Have the torso more defined and separated from background.
Show a bit of the face
Have the 'thing' erupt from a seam rather just out of blank 'wall'

Thanks!
I really regretted not showing some of the face in this, and I also thought the torso blended into the background a little too much, but I noticed after I thought I was done. I had been staring at this too long, and that slipped through. :)
I wanted the sunset to "erupt" more like it had been "let out" or something, but I just couldn't figure out how to do that. Any ideas?
I think I will most likely make a redo of this when I have a little more time, I like it, but I feel I could do much better.
Thanks for the feedback. :)
 

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