Toss or Keep & lighting C&C please!

[MissCream]

Can't decide if I like this or not. I don't like the angle of her foot or the hand by her head. I think her positioning is just weird in general. I do like how the graffiti turned out though

I am aware of the weird black blob on her shirt... Also how is the lighting in this? I am having a bit of trouble with so called "flat" lighting, I was only using one YN-460ii with a shoot through umbrella.


Untitled by Ms. Cream, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

The lighting is fine, particularly in view of the fact that you only had one light. That said, IMO, this image just doesn't work. Her outfit doesn't work with the surroundings and her position, is, to say the least, awkward. One for the bit-bucket I think.

 

[willis_927]

Ya its kind of an awkward angle for the model to be in, imo. But I agree the lighting looks good, and the graffiti looks good to.

 

[MissCream]

Thanks boys

 

[cgipson1]

Lighting is good.. model looks like she has fallen and can't get up!

 

[MissCream]

Lighting is good.. model looks like she has fallen and can't get up!

Hahaha she pretty much did... She had those heels on and I was in flip flops, you can't see it from the picture but that slope she's modelling on was so steep I fell about 4 times trying to get up it...

 

[gsgary]

I think that pose is only good for the bedroom

 

[Kaytlin]

I have to agree, the pose is very awkward. Her outfit doesnt really fit the setting as well. Maybe in a different pose it would be better though? Other than that, I think it came out pretty good lighting wise.

 

[RubyGloom]

I really love the graffiti is it a backdrop?

 

[Derrel]

That pose has never made any sense to made at all. It just does not compute.