what do you guys think of this?
Chris Jones by
robertwsimpson, on Flickr
It's probably very obvious who my inspirations are, and I'm not done tweaking my own style, but how do you guys like it? I'm open to helpful comments!
I don't really care for this, and while I do like Dave Hill's work, and even have some similar stuff myself, I think this style is just really a blend of cartoon and reality.
I can kind of, sort of, see the altered reality you were going for, but instead, it looks like an edit from an incompetent editor. There is nothing sharp about the photo at all. Remember, that just because something is less blurred than something else, doesn't mean it's sharp.
One point I do like, is the mans arm, on the right, with the muscles. I like the accentuation of the bicep, and would be kind of comicbookish, if done properly to the entire photo.
You should learn to be a bit nicer though, it helps when recieving constructive criticism, and maybe share your goal of this photo so we can help you get there.