Tunnel Vision

[Fred Berg]

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[PixelRabbit]

Hi Fred, this is a great subject and I like how you have framed it. My issue with it is the brightest spot is on the left side and my eye won't explore the image, it starts on the bright spot and doesn't want to leave it. Since we read left to right I thought maybe flipping it would help so I gave it a shot, I think it helps the viewer's eye not get trapped, what do you think?
(I tried the attach feature for the first time, hopefully it works! )

 

[Fred Berg]

Hi Fred, this is a great subject and I like how you have framed it. My issue with it is the brightest spot is on the left side and my eye won't explore the image, it starts on the bright spot and doesn't want to leave it. Since we read left to right I thought maybe flipping it would help so I gave it a shot, I think it helps the viewer's eye not get trapped, what do you think?
(I tried the attach feature for the first time, hopefully it works! )

Thanks, PixelRabbit, I appreciate the feedback and see what you're saying. However, the point is that the viewer should be transfixed, mesmerized even by the bright part towards the left. The image is meant to represent some hypnotic eye, perhaps of a demon or dragon, that compels the viewer to look and be trapped - to fall into the tunnel and be consumed....

 

[PixelRabbit]

No problem, well if trapping the viewer's eye was your goal I'd say you achieved it nicely! Good job

 

[Benjo255]

I like it A LOT. This is the king of image I'm really involved into. Mistery and geometry.