I like the partially-obscured small spider! Buuuut....I gotta say, I was HOPING for a hot pair of blondes, redheads, or even brunettes, a la the Doublemint Gum twins...
if there is a nit to pick, it's that bright area right underneath the juncture...that bright area needs to be "burned down", so as to focus more attention on the twin blooms. And while doing that, perhaps paint on some "minus exposure" on that green area at the top center as well.