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The_Traveler

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Well, they look pin sharp on my screen :thumbup:

I like the expressions on the front riders in both pics. Those guys look like they were going pretty fast so it seems a bit picky to point out that you cut off his foot in the first photo. Looks like a fun day.
 
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Thanks, Tish.

I deserve no credit for sharpness with AF.
My first crop with the first one was this below.
to emphasize the gap, but then it seemed too esoteric.

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It may just be my screen but in the crop, the gap looks less than in the first photo. I think it would be a shame to lose the first rider as his expression and stance really show how hard he was working.
 
Good shots. Original crop. I wouldn't have thought of that. I think the second picture has more to it. Would you crop it for editorial? An 'L' shape crop left and bottom to remove the cone and the half-a-spectator.
 
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Good shots. Original crop. I wouldn't have thought of that. I think the second picture has more to it. Would you crop it for editorial? An 'L' shape crop left and bottom to remove the cone and the half-a-spectator.

Sorry I missed your reply.

Re: the first. Getting the winner working hard in a bike race is always an easy shot; I wanted to emphasize the distance between them.

Re: the second. I was sort of stuck there. There was stuff on the right that took away the isolation of the rider and it was almost in focus. I like to stick to standard aspect ratios and I could have cropped out the spectator but would have had to clone out the orange cone. I didn't put much work into these, tbh, because my pictures here get so little response, I just got lazy - and I shouldn't have, so here it is.

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