Two for Critique

Photoboy · Dec 1, 2004

Here are two images from a recent portrait shoot. I think I like the way they turned out, but...as a frail human being...I crave feedback.

So...do they suck? Are they decent captures of the couple? What are you thoughts about them from a technical standpoint?

I appreciate each and every comment.

Thanks!

aggiezach · Dec 1, 2004

Very nice work! I especially like the second one! Great composition in both and a very powerful image in the 2nd one! Great tones as well. They both look great to me and I wouldn't change a thing!

Zach

magali · Dec 2, 2004

Photoboy said:
So...do they suck? Are they decent captures of the couple? What are you thoughts about them from a technical standpoint?

I appreciate each and every comment.

Thanks!

"So...do they suck? " : Oh

... No, I don't think it means the same than in french .... :taped sh: :lol:

++ I like your pictures very much : the idea, the composition, b&w, all.
The first is more classical that the second. But it helps to understand the situation. For me, it's like saying that, wherever she is, the woman is always in his friend's mind or heart. What else better to show how strong is love ! Very good picture :wink:

Trig · Dec 2, 2004

They are both great.

Have they been photoshopped? In what ways?

jadin · Dec 2, 2004

Your compositions are perfect. And your originality in having the reflections in the window really makes it stand out. It looks like she is looking directly at me which really draws me into the photo.

I suggest you get these enlarged as I almost guarantee the couple would be proud to have them to cherish.

Terrific job!

Photoboy · Dec 2, 2004

Cool. Thanks!

The only thing I did in PS was to convert them to a dark sepia, from full color.
Maybe a slight level adjustment, but that's it.

I really appreciate the comments, everyone!

Thanks, again!