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[PixelRabbit]

Would love to hear your thoughts, thanks for taking a look!

 

[KenC]

Nice - only suggestion I have is to try to bring out that dark, sort of rectangular area near the string on the left (and maybe the string as well).

 

[deeky]

Very nice texture. Try cropping just below the dark triangle top right, but otherwise very nice.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Thanks guys

 

[manaheim]

I actually think if you crop it more aggressively that you'd likely have something even better.

Think of it this way- if you can say it with less, then you're saying it more efficiently.

 

[manaheim]

Lot of different ways to do it, but here is one take.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Thanks Bunny

I like that option, I think I will revisit my shots and chop them up a bit and see what other comps I come up with, I think it's a worthy subject.

I have shot this barn a few times now but have toiled over the composition, that swoop is what really attracted me initially and I was trying to show it off in this version but I definitely see other options like yours thanks for the edit!

 

[PixelRabbit]

Oooooo... Maybe a set of 3 comps together?....

 

[Rick50]

I like the image and I like Bunnywabbits comment.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Thanks Rick