Looks like the flash (I'm assuming) took a lot of the depth of the rose out on the top & LH petals. Also the strong white on the right and the deep shadow white on the left distract me from the subject.
Also DOF is confusing my eye, a few of the baby's breath heads are in focus, while the majority are OOF.
But I like the idea of it, just a little fine tuning is all :thumbup: