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Frequency, Picture #1 is the much stronger composition of the two. In pic 2, the bus becomes the main subject, not the road rambling through the desolate landscape. I also like the wild flowers off to the right side of the road. Maybe getting lower to the ground, and a slight angling towards them would be a good way to bring them further into the picture, and at the same time help to eliminate some of the uninteresting scrub growth on the left side.
 
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Thank you Joel; you are right; actually the image with bus was unnecessary; if at all it was included, it should be proceeding away from the observer......
I too feel happy about those wild flowers.....

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I prefer the first also with its strong colour and lead in from the road. Have you tried cropping about a thumbs with (as you see it on screen) from the right to see if it looks better without the larger stick and larger tree to make the flora a bit more regular. ( it may or may not improve)
 
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I prefer the first also with its strong colour and lead in from the road. Have you tried cropping about a thumbs with (as you see it on screen) from the right to see if it looks better without the larger stick and larger tree to make the flora a bit more regular. ( it may or may not improve)
Thank you Jaomul...i never thought that way..... you mean as we see in the second image?

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Ya Frequency, like the composition in #2
 

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#1 is like a painting...awesome! :)

The bus takes attention away from the landscape, and the bright reflection on the front doesn't help.

Where was this taken?
 
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#1 is like a painting...awesome! :)

The bus takes attention away from the landscape, and the bright reflection on the front doesn't help.

Where was this taken?

Thank you FP; this was taken from one of the village in Karnataka, named Gundalpet, which is famous for floral cultivation.... when i was there i really felt that the place was not well exposed to tourists .....

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I'll refrain from commenting on the composition, but from a technical standpoint these both appear soft, oversaturated and grainy, plus you have some sensor dust issues.
 

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Over saturated, too much blue.
Composition could have been improved by moving to the right just a bit and centering the mountains in the top of the frame with the road going just a bit more left to right.
Since you like those little flowers if the photos had been taken with the camera at a lower angle they would have been featured more.
 

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I think the color saturation really makes the shot ;) Doesn't always work, but for some reason, I like it in this one. The crop is a big improvement.

I can feel the heat of the sun, the sticky moisture, and the vaguely sweet aroma of a million flowers in a distant field.
 

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Omg, that green is amaze.
 

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