Vehicle Shoot - Motorcycle and Truck

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Hey guys, I would just like to get some feedback/critique about 2 shoots that I did. I made a local posting offering to do some photo shoots for $10, essentially enough to cover gas and a little bit on top of that since I'm more than happy to do it. I just want to get some opinions on my work so far.

Truck set can be found here: Mike's 2001 Ford F150 - an album on Flickr
1)
Racks by Austin Rajki, on Flickr
2)
2001 FordF150 (2) by Austin Rajki, on Flickr
3)
2001 FordF150 (7) by Austin Rajki, on Flickr

Motorcycle set can be found here: Rick's 2006 CBR 600RR - an album on Flickr
1)
2006 CBR 600RR by Austin Rajki, on Flickr
2)
2006 CBR 600RR (2) by Austin Rajki, on Flickr
3)
2006 CBR 600RR (4) by Austin Rajki, on Flickr
 
I'm really digging the CBR. ONE of my favorites bikes out there.


Not really liking the truck shots though.
 
Agree that the lighting of the trucks could be better/brighter. I do like the colors of the reflection in #1. For #2, I dislike the 3/4 truck crop. If this is how it was composed, perhaps you could crop it down the middle? (Not sure if this would be better?) Try some PP to the truck shots?
 
The light quality and direction in all the shots is poor.
Except the last of the bike and sky, none of the backgrounds are very good.

Some light painting or modified constant/flash lighting would have helped a great deal to make the truck and the bike 'pop'.
 

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