Well, that camera phone is good.
But I think the photo could lose quite some of what shows at the bottom if it is the sunset sky you meant to show and were fascinated with the most. The part of town we can (barely) see at the bottom isn't the prettiest. And your pano comp is divided in an equal top and bottom, i.e. divided in half by the horizon line and I don't feel this is the best you can do to a landscape or cityscape.