Walk In The Slums

[JohnnyL]

C&C always appreciated.

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I tried to post less pictures so I can get more specific comments. Others are on my flickr.
Thanks!

 

[WimFoto]

well exposed photographs. i like the rich colors.
1 the front wheel is chopped off, it's only a little but distracting. a lower perspective is the way to go with this one. 2 the rusty chain is interesting, but out of focus.
3 is underexposed a bit. crop the foreground a little. the red slippers and the light through the window are the strong elements. is it in china?

 

[JohnnyL]

Thanks for commenting.

With 2 , I originally tried to get the chain focused but I took a few shots and I liked how this one , focusing on the tire threads came out.

Yes , it's in Shanghai ,China. I was told all these slums are being torn down and this is one of the last ones which will soon be gone as well.

 

[kamalzharif]

the first photo i think a bit to much eye catching subjects.. maybe you can reduced the distraction