The split down the middle is acceptable for reflections. The exposure looks ok, but I think you could get a little more pop with a levels/curves adjust. Subject wise its just not grabbing my attention. You did a lot of things right. Did you have any of the judges over at CPS take a look at it?
Can I ask, where in Cleveland is this? Used to live there and dont recognize the bridge.
CPS is the Cleveland Photographic Society. Once of the largest camera clubs in the country and they tought me nearly everything I know. An amazing group of people.
also burn the water a bit at about 4-5% with history brush, brings out the water surface texture more while not affecting overall contrast of the image.