Waterlilly

[Alpha]

Shot on Portra 160 VC, cropped from 645

 

[BoblyBill]

I'm sorry Max but this picture just seems to be a picture that you randomly took not careing about focus or compostion. There is nothing in the picture that keeps my interest. In your words... Boring.

 

[Alpha]

Fair play.

 

[New England Moments]

Wow now I can't decide if I like this one more then your B+W shot titled, St. Augustine College............

I'm speechless, I mean Speechless.........

After these two shots I certainly look forward to more of your critique....

Did I mention that I was speechless???

my only nit pic would be that with everything else going on in this photo, that the bottom right foreground corner has room for " The Kitchen Sink"... and you failed to include it??


Can this be considered "" Fair Play Also " ??

 

[Alpha]

Sure it's fair play, but is the vengeance really necessary?

 

[New England Moments]

No vengeance... just general critique... how do you feel about this pic?

Is this the effect you were after? Would this shot stand alone ?

Do you consider this an abstract?
Do you see this on someones wall?

Would this make a good postcard, something a yuppie might like??
Is this shot No Good?
Is it Boring?

 

[Alpha]

To be honest I don't really have any feelings about it...it was from my first roll of portra VC and I had no idea at the time how it would turn out. I could certainly live without it. I wouldn't expect to sell it or see it hanging in a gallery, if that's what you mean.

 

[ClarkKent]

This capture is a bit confusing to me as I look at it.

 

[Alpha]

what's actually in focus is the reflection. The lillies are under the surface of the water. I couldn't focus on the lillies themselves because there was too much crap floating on the surface.

 

[boogaguy]

If you have to explain it then it doesnt stand on its own.

 

[Alpha]

flol...i didn't think it was all that "confusing"

 

[abraxas]

Interesting- thought provoking. OTE?

 

[New England Moments]

If you have no feelings for it, as you said, then my question is, WHY WOULD YOU POST IT??

 

[The_Traveler]

Please post a larger image.

 

[abraxas]

Please post a larger image.

I would like to see the original uncropped shot.