Wedding Portrait

[Guero]

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated:

 

[Kegger]

#1 is a little red, but it may be from all the excitement.

#2 his chin is the focal point and his eyes are out of focus. Bad mojo in a port.

 

[Derrel]

kegger said it well....bad mojo...neither look is flattering or revealing.

 

[AverageJoe]

These photos are fantastic, nothing needs to be done with them, print them and hang them on the wall.

 

[delizo23]

the first one looks like a wax model

 

[CCarsonPhoto]

Wow, those are some spiffy eyelashes, bub!
Lol, #1 we can see his tonsils...not exactly flattering
#2 he has a really dark shadow on the side of his nose, and his head is tilted back, so, as Kegger pointed out, his eyes are OOF.
Was this on camera flash?

 

[cauzimme]

The focus on the second picture is wrong.

 

[EOS_JD]

Although they may have been taken at a wedding, they are not really wedding portraits - As said above there are colour issues with No1 and the focus is out on No2. It's tough shooting these kinds of shots.

 

[Guero]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. You guys are pointing out some things I didn't notice at first. Although, the pictures aren't exactly meant to be flattering, my friend (the bestman) was drunk and he was making these faces and yes this wasn't during the wedding this was after at the reception when I was just snapping pics with my cam because they only paid for the ceremony to be professionally done. Yes, I used flash. But, I repeat these aren't meant to be flattering hahaha.