Wedding shot for C&C

[rub]

Hey, looking for some c&c on this shot. This was my first wedding with off camera flash used.

Thanks.

Ps - linked from Facebook - so its pretty low res.

 

[bigtwinky]

dont like how those sprinkles cover one of the guy's face.

Its a cute idea, but would of loved a bit more emotion with the B&G, as they seem distant and cold...her shoulder is turned away from him... I dunno, I'm in for the fun pics, but they still need to show some emotion

 

[artoledo]

I agree with the PP. the popcorn is distracting and if the B&D were showing more emotion towards eachother you would have had a winner here.