Hey there. What are you going for here? Looks like a bunch of family snaps. Do you want critique/feedback on particular images?
#1 is funny. I found the composition of #3 quite good. Perhaps a bit of a contrast bump would be nice on that one.
Try numbering your images and selecting just a few that you want feedback on.
As a general comment on the set, all shots could be improved by shooting in softer light (morning, or evening).