went to the beach-14 pictures

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Let me know what you think.
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On my - admittedly bright - screen they mostly look a bit far on the bright side, all those photos which include sky, rocks, beach and water (save the palm trees) are on the brink of hurting my eyes (but that could also be my eyes...!)

And the first makes me stare and wonder what kind of animal we see in your frame? Is it something dead?

In two, your ocean will soon run out of the left side of your pic, unless you quickly straighten that horizon of yours ;).

Your daisy meadow in Photo 5 is really pretty and I like both exposure and the chosen DOF ... and I like daisies! The combination of white and pink ones helps here!

Ah, the more I look, the more crooked horizon lines I find ... unless the perspective looks deliberate (like in Photo 4) you should watch that.

And ooops, that jumping "other photographer" much watch his camera! :D
 
I think its some sort of weezel and yeah its dead.
The horizon on Photo 4 was done like that. You cant really tell from the photo at that size but Theres a man standing there with foot prints leading to him. And for the others Im not sure if it was being intoxicated or I cropped them wrong, ill have to check.
Thanks for you input La!
 

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