What do you think about this one?

[reissigree]

How could it have been better edited? Thanks!
EDIT: (Photo edited thanks to instruction from clanthar)

DSC_0053 by reissigree, on Flickr
DSC_0053 by reissigree, on Flickr

 

[clanthar]

OK,

Straighten it up.
Tone adjust it.
White balance it.
Then locally darken the sky and raise it's contrast.

Joe

 

[Nod]

I agree, plus I'd crop out the building on the left. Interesting sky.

 

[DiskoJoe]

looks like its going to rain. and your focus is a bit soft.

 

[HomelessBoy]

Need some cropping up to do. Nice location.