I think it's a bust. I realize you are starting to go the way of abstract photography and that whole genre is meh to me so who knows. I agree with Bitter and see a lines that lead me out of the image and give me nothing to come back to. The image is static and easy to forget. It looks like a pop flash was used (I know this is not the case) which gives harsh shadows and the PP didn't really help to bring anything back or add to the image.
Again, I don't do abstract. I'm just a guy looking at an image that I would trash immediately if it were on my computer.