Whats wrong with this photo?


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Jan 24, 2008
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Hi! I'm new here but I've been looking around and there are some great shots here :).

Basicly I have this photo, which I really like, but its missing something and I cant work out what it is. It was taken on an old Fujica ST605 (my backup camera that I use for colour shots, my main is a canon EOS10s)


It just feels too "crowded" and messy. I'm going to try b+w in a sec, I'm not sure why I didn't think of that in the first place hehe.

Sorry about the quality, its a badly scanned print, I need to dig up the negative.

Can anyone give me any sugestions?

it has an old feel to it which i like. maybe if it was shot at a different angle or it was further back?
Yes, I think I'm going to go back and have another shot (if its still there). I was thinking of going a bit wider (as far as I can remember my back was to a drystone wall so I cant go any further back).

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