When camera and bored collide - My Shoot

Hey guys im yet to do a shoot of a person of along these line, so sat in my room board, i thought id try on me. I took these myslef using the timer, so they are a little rushed ie diving across the room to get in the photo
What do you think.. Can i get some C+C please.





Cheers
Andrew

 

the second one is cool, would like to see it minus the shadows, but its a fun picture