I don't like that crop at all. I think the other fireman is important to the composition, as he repeats the angle of the handrail...helmet to helmet is the same line. I also like the arc of his body, leaning back, and that he is looking at the "action" taking place. :thumbup:
Good work. I really like it. Sometimes black and white speaks volumes over color when taking photos at fire scenes. I have actually thought about taking some black and white when I am on scenes. So far all I shoot is color. Again, good work