FYI I found out that i forgot to turn on "prevent ghosting" on photomatix...so i reran the hdr process..and edited in the new version into the original post. it looks better than the first assy version.
I like one but do not like the noise. The hdr one takes care of the noise but its a bit dark. I do love the contrast in the hdr one. Also, I would recommend a tighter crop. Maybe something like this. Im am only a beginner but here is what I had in mind. I did this in less then 2 minutes.
the noise was from the fact that i forgot i still had the camera on auto iso, and it was snapping things at 400...which isnt bad, but its a bad base to start off with if youve got any fixing to do after the pic is taken. thanks for the input guys.