White Bed - Extreme Edit (Slightly NSFW)

[Tropicalmemories]

Wasn't sure if I liked this shot from a casual photo session at the weekend, so was trying some extreme edits, and quite liked the mood of this version.

 

[Derrel]

Seeing it on my phone, seems about right.

 

[smoke665]

Wasn't sure if I liked this shot from a casual photo session at the weekend, so was trying some extreme edits, and quite liked the mood of this version.

WOW! I really, really like the direction you're going on this one. I know this is the Just for fun section where serious criticism isn't expected but it's such a great shot that I couldn't resist. First off for such a light and airy shot, it needs room to breathe, as is it's cramped. I added a little space on the left and right side which gives it just enough to give it a little space. Also took the liberty of adding a little matte effect to open up the whites/midtones, and highlight that light feeling you had going. Again really great shot!

 

[Tropicalmemories]

Wasn't sure if I liked this shot from a casual photo session at the weekend, so was trying some extreme edits, and quite liked the mood of this version.

WOW! I really, really like the direction you're going on this one. I know this is the Just for fun section where serious criticism isn't expected but it's such a great shot that I couldn't resist. First off for such a light and airy shot, it needs room to breathe, as is it's cramped. I added a little space on the left and right side which gives it just enough to give it a little space. Also took the liberty of adding a little matte effect to open up the whites/midtones, and highlight that light feeling you had going. Again really great shot!

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Thank you! Your edits really add to the feel.

 

[Tropicalmemories]

Another one with a different look - she'd just got up when I ambushed her with the 35mm f1.4, so a natural, no make-up portrait.

 

[smoke665]

While still a solid shot, the 2nd doesn't have that dream like appeal for me of the first.

 

[Space Face]

Two good shots. I prefer the second with the face on show. That said, I'm sure the first tells it's own story.

 

[weepete]

I really like the first one, I think it works very well