"Wings" part 2...pic heavy...sorry

[jadelm31]

It has been over a year since I have been on TPF, sharing and learning. I gave birth to twins this year so I've been busy. Here are just some of my shoots I managed to get while VERY pregnant. Hope you all are well.

13. 225 by energizero, on Flickr

14.223 by energizero, on Flickr

15.221 by energizero, on Flickr

16.218 by energizero, on Flickr

17.213 by energizero, on Flickr

18.204 by energizero, on Flickr

19.202 by energizero, on Flickr

20.200 by energizero, on Flickr

21. 191 by energizero, on Flickr

22.189 by energizero, on Flickr

23185 by energizero, on Flickr

24183 by energizero, on Flickr

 

[JdWiding]

Some cute shots! a few of them are very grainy and the eyes on 19 and 20 seem a bit too sharp. you may have just over sharpened a few of these photos and it produced alot of noise.

your signature is very obnoxious, Definetly change that, bring it to a corner, shrink it.... let the photo be most importiant.

Very cute poses and your daughter is a very beautiful subject !

 

[tirediron]

^^ That. Exactly! ^^

 

[jadelm31]

Thanks guys! I have an AWFUL watermark...really need to work on that. I developed mine in PSE...and HATE IT....where or how did you make yours?

 

[CdTSnap]

Watch that burn tool also, some of the dark marks are too much

 

[paigew]

Erica!! Your back

 

[JdWiding]

I use Photoshop CS6, Ive never used express, I dont know much about it, but go to deviantart.com and get some new fonts for PS if PSE Will let you import new fonts and brushes and pick something out thats really sharp and dantie but professional. throw in some kind of vine brush into the back or around it then boom, take you 10 minutes.

 

[Braineack]

why were you shooting with such a high ISO on such a sunny day and low f-stop?

 

[jadelm31]

thanks for the watermark info!! It was actually early evening and a cloudy day. I thought I shot pretty wide open though (it was a while ago actually)...

 

[jenko]

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I really like what you were going for in this shot. Her expression and posture are so enigmatic! I think you could do better in this image by cleaning up some of the kiddie boo-boos on the shins, and getting rid of the can behind her. I suck at cloning out large objects, but maybe you are better than me at it. I would probably use the right side of the image, below the treeline, and layer it over then paint it in. But like I said, I'm not so good at large clone jobs.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Thanks guys! I have an AWFUL watermark...really need to work on that. I developed mine in PSE...and HATE IT....where or how did you make yours?

There is nothing wrong with what you used to make yours. Its that font. Is not really appealing and stinks of ametuer. You could always out source this to a nice designer for not much and get a nice vectored image made that is resizable.