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_jessicalynn_

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Both are okay. One would have been better without the wall section. I loke the color.
 
Love the color here!

#1 Dont like the 90 degree shoulders. Looks also like the background was put in digitally as it just stops at the wall (I know this is not the fact, just perception). Would have probably added the hands in the photo holding the hood area. Head tilt too would be nice.

#2 a little hot in the right side of the face (typical in fair skin) She looks very cold with her hands covered and looks as though she is trying to warm them. A little head tilt would hurt either.

Otherwise good model and nice photos.
 
I like, I just feel the skin is way to smooth. I'm not sure if that was on purpose. If her skin is naturally that smooth. or if it's just me. However, that's me knit picking.. Good job!
 
Your model is absolutely precious! Perhaps you could get her to "animate" some. Not real crazy about the hands in front of her face, either.
 
#1 agree about not liking the wall plus I find my eye distracted from the face to the scalf its way to busy in colors.
#2 is the better of two IMO but I am also not a big fan of the hands in front of the face.
 

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