Love the color here!
#1 Dont like the 90 degree shoulders. Looks also like the background was put in digitally as it just stops at the wall (I know this is not the fact, just perception). Would have probably added the hands in the photo holding the hood area. Head tilt too would be nice.
#2 a little hot in the right side of the face (typical in fair skin) She looks very cold with her hands covered and looks as though she is trying to warm them. A little head tilt would hurt either.
Otherwise good model and nice photos.