Wonderland Photoshoot

[Serah]

Well, I did this photoshoot with a friend of mine (inspiration was Wonderland) and was wondering if they were any good/what I could do to improve them:

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There's a lot more than these, so I may put more up later, but for now any constructive criticism on these would be greatly appreciated! oh and most of these images have been edited (especially #1), if you'd like to see the originals just let me know~

 

[Corvphotography]

3 is my fav. number 1 does nothing for me. looks like a scene out of twilight. in 2, he looks like a pedophile. lol

 

[mrsmacdeezy]

Hi there, welcome for the forum!
IMHO, this really doesn't make me think of a wonderland... I do like number 3! I think I would like 4 better if the model was in focus more, of course this could be due to some of your pp...?

 

[SrBiscuit]

1. not digging the under exposure. nothing really look to be in focus. and it seems some PP was pushed too far.

2. kinda snapshottish

3. i like the tones here. could do without the words.

4. no. everything is out of focus. the noise is distracting...wait i take it back...some of the asphalt in the fg is in focus.

5. not for me.

6. my fave of the bunch.

keep on shootin! :thumbup:

 

[den9]

number 2 he looks like someone id keep my kids far away from