It's only fair to tell them that Christmas has gone. You shouldn't have taken a picture without telling them! :mrgreen:
It looks good. The only suggestion I can make if you get to take it again is to be a little higher or swing round a bit so you can get a clearer shot of the pen on the paper.
This was taken a couple of weeks before Xmas while my wife was writing out all the family's Christmas cards. She was getting quite fed up by this point, and wasn't at all amused by the fact that my total contribution to the effort was to take a photo of her doing all the work.