you failed...

santino · Jul 9, 2004

Just an experiment...

comments are welcome

Sharkbait · Jul 9, 2004

What did I fail at? :scratch:

canonrebel · Jul 9, 2004

I like it. Were you trying to place the ash tray in the main position of a "Golden Rectangle"?

Great composition.

santino · Jul 9, 2004

yeah, I was. thx for your comments

craig · Jul 9, 2004

I do not get the title. You are definitely on to something. I would try a tighter f stop and move the art away from the background to lessen the effect of the shadow.

canonrebel · Jul 9, 2004

santino said:
yeah, I was. thx for your comments

I would have submitted this one in the Critique Thread if it had been mine. We rarely ever get to see attempts at the GR (Golder Rectangle) and you've done it well.

santino · Jul 9, 2004

canonrebel: Maybe you're right, didn't see the GR (I'm kinda new in here

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craig: I admit the title's kinda strange, it says that you had to drink that stuff and eat but you didn't, so you failed

Jeff Canes · Jul 9, 2004

Appear sexual to me, failed to resist temptation

canonrebel · Jul 9, 2004

Jeff Canes said:
Appear sexual to me, failed to resist temptation

:lmao: I love it!! Great insight there, Jeff Canes. I like your interpretation better.

Corry · Jul 10, 2004

Can someone explain to me what exactly the golden rectangle is?

canonrebel · Jul 10, 2004

core_17 said:
Can someone explain to me what exactly the golden rectangle is?

Golden Rectangle
http://fotogenetic.dearingfilm.com/golden_rectangle_2.html

jadin · Jul 12, 2004

I went for rule of thirds for this shot, but it's not so far from Golden Rectangle land me thinks.

Fun stuff.

canonrebel · Jul 12, 2004

Jadin, you have a very effective illustration. For a more definitive GR, consider adding at least 2 elements placed on the arc in the left 2/3's of the composotion that would compliment the main subject.