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Stelex

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My daughters trying to draw a portrait of me. Brisbane Art Gallery.


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The DOF doesnt really work in the first one. And the pose in #1 and #2 doesnt quite make sense. However the DOF on the second is great. All of them are very sharp and I like that. The lighting is also very nice as well.
 
The only comment about the 2nd one I have is that because of the crop and her pose, it looks like that hand doesn't belong to her, like as if someone else is sticking their hand in the frame.
 
The only comment about the 2nd one I have is that because of the crop and her pose, it looks like that hand doesn't belong to her, like as if someone else is sticking their hand in the frame.


YES! good call... that is what bothers me about it. Well put
 
Stunning pictures!

I have a question about #2, How would it look if the tip of the pencil were in focus?

~Jay
 

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