Zara

[412 Burgh]

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Zara by ZDiBeradin, on Flickr

1.5 (Cropped due to suggestions)

Zara Cropped by ZDiBeradin, on Flickr

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Zara by ZDiBeradin, on Flickr

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friends by ZDiBeradin, on Flickr

Any input would be lovely.

 

[chuasam]

try bumping up the contrast a little...and make the pictures a bit brighter

 

[Ernicus]

Not sure I'm liking all the dead space....why landscape out of curiousity. The last one almost works, and it may just be me but when I see it it says "oh look a big tree....and there's two chicks behind it". Just my thoughts.

 

[chuasam]

"oh look a big tree....and there's two chicks behind it". Just my thoughts.

1...2...3... cue in the Bollywood dancers

 

[412 Burgh]

Geeze. Where else should I shoot? There are so many people that post picture outdoors.

 

[PinkDoor]

Not sure I'm liking all the dead space....why landscape out of curiousity. The last one almost works, and it may just be me but when I see it it says "oh look a big tree....and there's two chicks behind it". Just my thoughts.

Landscape as in the setting or landscape as in Portrait vs Landscape?


I like the first two photos. For number 2 - would have been cuter to have her sitting in a chair, as opposed to squatting in the bushes. Looks like she might be potty-ing.

#3 - cute idea, but my issue is that the focus is on the three, and the girls are blurred. Correct focus could have changed this one.

Are these senior shoots?

 

[412 Burgh]

Landscape as in the setting or landscape as in Portrait vs Landscape?

I like the first two photos. For number 2 - would have been cuter to have her sitting in a chair, as opposed to squatting in the bushes. Looks like she might be potty-ing.

#3 - cute idea, but my issue is that the focus is on the three, and the girls are blurred. Correct focus could have changed this one.

Are these senior shoots?

Ohh must of missed that lol. Wonder if he meant landscape or portrait. However they are just friends that wanted some pictures and I always could use the practice. I just can never seem to get a money shot.... All in due time.

 

[Ernicus]

lol, I meant as in the orientation, not physically outside.

 

[Ernicus]

just a littel croppy poo and it's a different picture. Some are better on here at "seeing" the crop than I am , but this is what I see.

 

[Jaemie]

Gosh, you have adorable friends.

#1: Nice. Just crop a little from top and left.

#2: Cute! Just clone out the speck/bug to the right of model's head.

#3: Yay - They're multiplying! This one isn't as strong as the first two photos, but it's fun.

 

[Trever1t]

The first thing that's just right in my face is the crop, as Ernicus has already stated.

 

[412 Burgh]

any better?


Zara Cropped by ZDiBeradin, on Flickr

 

[Ernicus]

Didn't crop much IMO. Are you eventually going to print this...if so...what size?

It's a bit larger than an 8x10 landscape crop, and nowhere near a 8x10 portrait crop.




I'm also a bit curious as to why you want so much space off to the left.

 

[The_Traveler]

Since everyone is getting busy with the crop, let me look at something else.
It is slightly overexposed.
Just pull down the center (in levels) a bit and you have a nice, saturated image.

 

[412 Burgh]

Didn't crop much IMO. Are you eventually going to print this...if so...what size?

It's a bit larger than an 8x10 landscape crop, and nowhere near a 8x10 portrait crop.




I'm also a bit curious as to why you want so much space off to the left.

no, just for fun. To me the image on the left is good. I don't like seeing a huge close up that doesn't show anything but the model. Maybe it's me but I just like it. I do have a few I took portrait oreintation but she isn't smiling and is making a mean mugging face... Unpleasant