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  1. Photoboy

    Photoboy TPF Noob!

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    Here are a couple of shots from a work outing. I thought they came out pretty good.

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    What do you think?
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    Nice...I wish in the first one you could see the face of the guy with the ball better though.
     
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    Photoboy TPF Noob!

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    It looks better in the large print version, but being as this is a smaller version, I lightened it up. Better?
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    That does help with being able to see his face. Nice job.
     
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    hmm imo, the first oneis really great - nice dof makes that the background is not distracting. Although the light on guys face is not perfect. I think that cropping is superb! Nothing really is cropped out... everything is full... even a woman in the far background
     

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