Alaska Range

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  1. TimTreadwell

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    i took this picture out my back window, just wondering if you had anything to say about it/suggestions on how to improve for next time.
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    Looks grainy and a bit uderexposed, but Im just a noob. Wish I had that in my backyard though :)
     
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    Definately grainy. Is there anything that happens on the water. That is water, right? I like the mountains, but everything below those do nothing for me. Is there anything interesting in the water?

    ~Michael~
     
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    I wish I had that in my backyard too!

    The mountains and foreground are to similar; there's not enough contrast. It also is very grainy, and it also looks blurry.
     
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    I just scrolled down and took about the bottom inch off the picture and it really cleaned it up. The big chunks of ice that are in close seem to clutter up the view. Try it, it makes for a much more enjoyable look.
     
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    are you saying something like this?
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    Its a pretty nice shot but a little grainy. I also used to live in the Yukon (just a little east of Alaska) and me and my family would usually go to BC every Christmas brake (family there) and Alaska every second summer. Its a very nice place.
     
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    wow is your backyard frozen? by the looks of this your backyard should be chunks of ice....
     
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    I gotta ask, is it the window causing the vignetting on the sides of the picture? There is some freaky things going on there.

    Brian
     
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    yea it might be the window. i thought cause i was wonderin that myself. thanks. and no thats the inlet thats frozen it goes:my backyard, the bike trail then the inlet so it was out my back window.
    -thanks
     
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    TT, I like that much better, don't you?
     
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    Well, I dont liek it too much, I miss some cool clouds and a sexy blue sky... But I like taking photos from the window in my bedroom too, and they always suck, so I shouldnt say much...
     

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