Another Mare & Foal

Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by GutsAndGlory, Sep 23, 2007.

  1. GutsAndGlory

    GutsAndGlory TPF Noob!

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    This is it. I realize that the colors are very vibrant, but I kinda think that in a weird way, it adds to the "dreamlike" quality of it.
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  2. abraxas

    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It looks like you lost a bit of the top of the colt. The 'blue' part on up of the shot is unnecessary and distracting.

    There's something going on with the line that is made with the front leg of the colt and the shadow in the sapling pine behind and the bottom of the older growth pine tree above that.

    These minor details keep you from having complete control over the flow of the composition which is otherwise excellent.

    None of these are shot killers though and you have captured a really special moment.
     

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