Discussion in 'Commercial/Product photography' started by x-man, Feb 14, 2007.
This is my homework of my photo crouse. please give me some Feedbacks. Thank!
Looks super. You should get an A.
It does look good. One thing though, the shadow from the O J is too large a percentage of the total photo. Maybe bring the light on the back right around to the left and have the shadow more down the right side of the photo? That or bring the perspective back some.
I'll second that.
Yes. Good Idea! Why I don't think on it. (I try to fix it for long long time, but not work!):hail:
Thank! but my teacher only give me "C".
Woah! Again, I agree with Fred... tough teacher.
I don't know if this is any comfort, but if this was a job for a client rather than an assignment, you would have got PAID.... much better than getting an A. And, you'd get repeat business.
this is A+.....except i have one comment (i'm a little picky when it comes to fruit and vegetable)......i would change the strawberry to a better one.......it doesnt look so fresh....and maybe spray a little bit of water on the lettuce to make it look fresher
Thank! I have been thinking about how to start my our bussiness for quite long time, do you have any advice?
Thank for your comment. I will try make it better on next time!
i think the situation is a little different in HK compare to north america (western culture).......because the culture is different and perspective is different.......i assume you are located in HK because of your signature and your name........i would consult someone from your area.....i'm not a racist.......but i do know for a fact that these two cultures think very differently......because i'm also one of your race mr. WONG........:mrgreen:
but first and most important....you need to have a porfolio or maybe a website to show ppl how good you are....and prepare business cards if you are going to build connections
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