Burnt down pier

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  1. Ripnowell45

    Ripnowell45 TPF Noob!

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    Hey let me know what you guys think... Feel free to edit if you would like.

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    Guess not... Nobody ever likes to give me advise or input on this site.
     
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    I'm sorry... This is the first time that I have seen this picture... I like it... I'm not sure I would change anything to be honest... I like to composition, lighting, and the patterns. Good shot.
     
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    crop out the sky....great shot otherwise...neat!!
     
  5. Ripnowell45

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    How much of the sky do you think? All of it?
     
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    I would try cropping out the entire sky...


    Have you tryed this shot in B&W??
     
  7. BoblyBill

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    I think that the B&W works really well here... This is what I came up with...

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    Hmpf...I'm still too darn slow on PS....well here's a quick edit, I included both ....I like the B&W!!


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    It usually takes more than a couple of hours to get a response. Sometimes more than a day. This board isn't that crazy active.

    Here's my shot at it. I think it would be even more interesting if the camera was even lower so that the one pile was jutting up over the horizon.

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    My thoughts exactly.
     
  11. Ripnowell45

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    Yea I see what you guys mean... Thanks for the edits I am most likely going to go back down there and shoot again I liked some of the results but it was just too cold and windy to stay down there for long.
     
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    yeah that would really work
     

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