Carolina sunset

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  1. DLozada

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    I took this at the beach in North Carolina in June. I used a Nikon Coolpix 5200, and I didn't edit the picture.
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    So, tell me what you like/dislike and what you would have done differently. Also, if anyone wants to do any fancy editing then that's cool too. Thanks.
     
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    This photo is very pretty. Its very interesting to look at the rays!
     
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    beautiful...love the rays!
     
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    I agree... I like it. I think I might've tried zooming out a bit and maybe a vertical composition but I'm not sure how much you could improve on the composition. I think if you added a bit of contrast into it the rays might pop a bit more.
     
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    yes, i do agree with this. thanks for the comments thus far! :)
     
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    Beautiful photo.
     
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    [​IMG]Since you said it was okay to edit I raised the contrast and took the exposure down some. Where was this shot by the way.
     
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    the rays look better :thumbup: . this was shot at a beach between Beaufort and Hilton Head, South Carolina.
     
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    If I lived in that area I would be bankrupt. I could never afford to make all the great images in my mind from the days I lived in wilmington and shot pictures all up and down that coastline.
     
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    I totally understand. It is so peaceful and natural there. It's untouched. :)
     
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    or as you pictures shows the touches man made are insignificant in that enviornment
     

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