Circles C&C

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  1. shuttermountain

    shuttermountain TPF Noob!

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    I am now shooting with a Nikon D90 and have been on a black and white binge for awhile and would like to get some feedback on some B&W photos.

    This particular photo was taken in the front entrance of an office building. It was bit difficult to shoot as there is a bush right where the camera is and no room to set a small tripod down so I ended up one-handing the camera to take the photo and this is the result and is bit softer then I would of liked..

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  2. er111a

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    that looks so cool, I like it :)
     
  3. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Neat attempt. Good going for finding that "unique view".
    The trouble for me is that the circles and the lines of trees, do a fantastic job of leading you up to, basically, nothing.

    Could be cool to get a friend to pose out in the grassy field, in whimsical ways.
     
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    I love the Idea behind this... the background is kind of distracting and i feel that the circles tunnel to something that should be at the end... Maybe try re-shooting it with someone standing at the end.. where the circle ends and meets the eyes..
     

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