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  1. white

    white TPF Noob!

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    ilford hp5 film, 50 mm + red filter + circular polarizer. prints are kind of junky; i just wasn't feeling it tonight.

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    The first one isn't composed quite right: The top of the building cuts the picture in half. It leaves the eye searching for a place to rest..... You're heading in the right direction in the second one though.
     
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    Hm, I don't know if there is anything that can be done about it; if I put the building on the bottom third, I lose the curving line; put it on the top third and I lose the sky, and there wasn't anything interesting below the curving line anyway.

    Glad you like #2. It turned out how I envisioned it, more or less.
     
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    I like the sky and the angle of the second one, but the image has too much dead space. The building is just too black and lacks detail.
     

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