Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Sk8man, Jan 15, 2005.
had some spare time so i made couple of shots.
Okay - I like the subject - nicely posed, nice image. The background seems a bit off. I see 3 colours in number 1 (counting the door frame) and 4 in number too - its too busy for me.
I love the first one!!! great! and I like the way he background meets your hair!
I notice that there's a fan hanging in the background. Is the setting intentional?
The shot looks very professional to me.
Both shots are good, however, the fan in the background of #2 is distracting.
I really like the first one also, its really peaceful.
IMO #2 the fan in the background is distracting, the pose is odd look like your praying
i like #1
the first one is really great, it's a little bit narcissistic :mrgreen:
I like the lights effects (dark on the top, light on the bottom). Black and white is also a good choice ;-)
the second is more strange for me, the pose is like you're reparing your door... and the black shadow over your head seems to be a big wig :mrgreen:
I agree with some of the other comments. The fan is distracting. The technical elements of the shots are very well done.
Great tones, I really like how your "framed" by the doorway but your arm appears to step outside the "frame" when you hang over it. Technially it looks very well done but I have to agree with the others that the fan is really killing it for me.
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