From the Rocker to the Grave

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Don Allison, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Don Allison

    Don Allison TPF Noob!

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    Comments appreciated. Thank You.

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  2. Rob

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    I can't let you slip off the back of the page with no comments! How rude!

    It's an interesting shot and it took me a while of thinking... grave? what grave? Then I looked at the natural diagonal line from the chairs to the background - clever shot.

    That's the good bit, but here's the critique: The spiral circle thingies are distracting and pull the eye because of the contrast with the clapboard background. The crop is very tight on the top of the chairs which is (no offence) a bit clumsy when combined with that shadow area.

    The idea is great and the shot is very nearly there. Whilst I'm being critical, I'd probably drop the brightness a touch or something - there's a little something missing with the exposure.

    Good to see a new fellow posting some pics though, hope you take my comments in good humour and I look forward to seeing more!

    Rob
     
  3. aprilraven

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    i'm with rob, this is too good to pass up to the back page...

    i personally love the idea..and the shot is really interesting.....i think you did a great job with the title, and the picture tells a story on its own...

    welcome! and great shot!
     

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