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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by spiffybeth, Feb 17, 2008.

  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    this is the original:

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    and this is what ive done to it:

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    too much? not enough?

    and how is the subject as a whole? the floor line isnt straight. im aware of that.

    c/c please!
     
  2. chris_arnet

    chris_arnet TPF Noob!

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    i like what you did, but i think the subject lacks as a whole. it just seems kinda flat to me man. just my take. other than that, i like it.
     
  3. domromer

    domromer TPF Noob!

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    cool in an abstract way.
     
  4. invisible

    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    How about this composition?

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  5. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the feedback!

    thanks dom!

    i dont like that composition, but thanks for trying!
     

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